Testmission for my campaign

Hi! At first, some of you may know me as Impossible Uncorrect from the HLP Board. So, I am now here for (I think) three days and didn’t talk very much (Which means I didn’t talk anyways).
So that it is usefull for you, that I’m here, I created the first mission for my campaign. (Not Deadly Secrets!) I want to make sure, that my Missiondesign is ok for you so I uploaded the Mission here. Please tell me how it could be improved. What could be better? What was good? So, I hope you think it’s ok and you enjoy the mission!

Engage and Destroy! (Download)

BTW, Englisch is not my first language so, if there are any Grammar or word mistakes, feel free to tell them to me. Well, thanks for playing it.

well I had a fast run just now..

The fighters of the first wave don't attack the GTVA, hell they don't even try to defend themselves properly, issue orders with the IA handling sexps.

The enemy cruisers do nothing to defend themselves from the Monitor, there's little danger here so it's unlikely the player will loose the mission, make it harder for the player to win (not adding more enemy wings, use your imagination and try to give a difficult task for Alpha 1).

Thanks for playing it.

Hm, that's a point I didn't thought about...What could that task be. Thanks for commenting.